IOCT Audition: Murphy's Law p.2

 There'r many, many things I'm not thrilled about with this. For instance, I wish I had designed that berth differently. Can you tell/guess Aladriel is in it? Without me telling you? Not easily, I don't think... oops. And what in the world made me think that having a whole panel of Linast's eye would achieve anything? And how come the dialogue doesn't flow like it used to-- wait, that's because I made so many changes... Including one that has Millie completly ignore what Linast says at first. Wishy-washy attempt to have Linast's at least acknowledge that, but still. Bad storytelling, bad flow.

So. Anyway. About the actual story. Millie can be rather single minded... Linast decided it's better to work with that rather than against it. Of course, at the moment she still thinks he's just panicking on her. As soon as she gets over that she's going to be pointing out the complete and pure idiocy of his plan, at least as she sees it.

...Ah, Linast, why can't you show up better in dark lighting?

Wait.

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