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There once was a Miss Mary Lye,

Who always was baking us pie.

But often we’d find

It was one of a kind--

It’d poison the rats, would her pie!
A limerick from my creative writing class, and the first I've ever written. (It being written for school, I think we were already missing the usual point of a limerick, but it taught us the form so hey. xD)  Figured I'd submit something lighthearted and short before moving on to the next short story, which is pretty dark in tone.
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NIPPONkidd Dec 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, I've never read a limerick like that before. XD
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NIPPONkidd Dec 27, 2013  Student General Artist
I like it though, it's really funny. :)
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Heh, thanks. :) I'm not really used to writing lighthearted anything, so it was an interesting change.
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NIPPONkidd Dec 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah, I have the same problem. ^^;
You did really well for your first try--at limericks, I mean.
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:icongrumpy-old-snake:

It seems to be a pretty common one, though, so at least we're not alone? xD


Thanks. :)

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NIPPONkidd Dec 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Yeah, at least there are others whom we can relate with. :D
And you're most welcome.
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